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Tuesday, 21 July 2015
Show not Tell
Slytherin and Ravenclaw writing groups are learning how to show not tell in our writing. These are our practice sentences. See if you can guess what we are feeling....
Name
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Show not tell….
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Penny
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My mouth is moving like I want to say something but I can't. I can't wait till we land my Dad will be happy to see me ! I look through the window to see if we are there yet but we have still
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savana
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My tummy feels like I'm going to puke. I look around to see if I can see mum but I can't.
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ollie
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I hope we land soon because I am getting butterflies in tummy I can feel them fluttering around. I need a vomiting bag NOW!!! Finally the
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Sam
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My heart is pounding. No one was around me that I know . I was by myself I am FREAKING OUT!!!
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Harry
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My eyes are watery and my head is down. I am crossing my arms and I am looking around for
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Name
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Show not tell….
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Cate
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I smiled as I was biking on the footpath.
My hands were shaking as I peddled away.
My cheeks went red.
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Gemma
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My face lit up, my cheeks were red.
Some tears come through my eyes as I peddled away.
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Jake
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My face with beginning to turn into a big grin.
As I was walking I didn't feel to good.
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Cam
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I was smiling because I found a bigger hamlet.
I didn't have a big enough helmet and I didn't like it.
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Ben
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As my legs were pushing the pedals my legs were pushing the pedals slowerer.
My face was going red
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Sunday, 19 July 2015
Cross Country Form
Fill in your time and name for cross country training.
If you can't see the form (maybe you're on an ipad) click here: http://goo.gl/forms/b1uHzwFmxV
If you want to see the progress you are making, click here.
If you can't see the form (maybe you're on an ipad) click here: http://goo.gl/forms/b1uHzwFmxV
If you want to see the progress you are making, click here.
Wednesday, 8 July 2015
HP Rural Women's Technology Competition
Happy Holidays Tawhai Team! Some very exciting news!
Our video for the Rural Women's Technology Competition has made it to the top 25!! Go us!
Hopefully we make it through to the finish line as winners!
Our video for the Rural Women's Technology Competition has made it to the top 25!! Go us!
Hopefully we make it through to the finish line as winners!
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