We have been very busy writing persuasions for the HP Rural Women's Technology Grant. We wrote them into a google doc, and could read and comment on each others work for peer editing. We have been working on giving constructive, specific criticism to help our classmates.
You can read our draft here, and leave us a comment too.
It is good for us to have comments so that we can see where we need to fix up our work.
We recorded our persuasions and videoed dramas to send through to the Rural Women. Hopefully we win! The first prize is $10,000 to spend on technology.
Wish us luck.
